Upvote 1 Suffocation Completed!

by bluestockings
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Fear of what has and will become of you. This is the suffocation I feel that chokes me.



This was just a short piece of writing I did when I felt totally alone and forgotten. I know from reading it, 

one can feel connected to it and understand the troubled feelings of youth when we are just trying hard to fit in and llive without hurting others but it just seems to not work. The common emotion of loneliness that spreads and eats us up. Disappointment and hurt.



I just hope some of you will understand my feelings that I poured into this while I was under stress.

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Aoi_Magnolia  on says about chapter 1:
Man, this really hit home for me. I understand completely how you probably felt while writing this piece and I think a lot of teens can. I go through the same thing with my mom (especially now with me looking at colleges). And I couldn't help but nod at some of the things you said. This was both filled with angst but pure from the heart. Thank you for sharing a piece of you with me. It was truly a beautiful piece and I hope you're able to do what you love when the time comes. :)

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