oo1

by ohitszoya
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           A normal afternoon, in the residence of Runderiff, there lived a teenage boy named Darwin. He never talked to people that easily. He even doesn't approach his parents when he's inside their house. He is always in his room with his headphone on his head with its highest volume. He doesn't go to school 'cause he is a kind of a freak when he interacts with the crowd. His parents agreed not to send him in school because of the horrible incident happened 8 years ago. That time, Darwin was at school and in that day, they had an occasion to be celebrated that every student should go to the auditorium to watch some presentations. All students went there including Darwin .Then suddenly a campus bully was acting very naughty and he's been banging all those empty seats to the wall and had kicked some dweeb students until everyone in the auditorium was annoyed. Darwin, with headphones in his head, wasn't paying attention to the bully who was making a scene. The bully was shouting "Ahhhh!!!" and bangs the seats again. Until the bully noticed that Darwin was not affected of the annoying acts he was doing. Then the bully punched Darwin as if he's trying to get Darwin's attention. "Hey! What's your problem dude? Aren't you annoyed? Huh?!" said the bully. Darwin had no reaction at all but he is holding the part of his arm where the punch mark was found. The bully wasn't satisfied and brought a chair to hit Darwin's head. Fortunately, he avoided the chair and stood up to get another chair to throw it to the bully. The bully did not avoid the chair and was hit in the head. Darwin punched him continuously until the bully lost his consciousness. He found a glass bottle and hit the bully in the head leaving much blood behind. All of the students and teachers saw what he did and the principal expelled Darwin from the school. The bully died and had his burial day scheduled the same day, on Darwin's birthday.

 

 

Darwin's birthday came like a normal day for him. His parents hugged and greeted him with a smile. But still Darwin said no words but to smile back. In his room, Darwin sat on his bed, and found a blood stain that was as wide as an average head stick on the bed sheet. He was shocked and curious of what he saw. He held the blanket and checked if it was still fresh and wet. No second had passed and his finger was prickled as if there's a needle behind the sheet. He dropped the sheet and saw his finger having a profuse bleeding. "But it was just a small wound" He thought to himself. He was again curious why his finger did not stop from bleeding. He quickly applied sufficient amount of bandage but it was still bleeding. Until the night came and it stopped.

 

 

The next morning, his parents decided to go out for shopping and leave Darwin with a babysitter to watch him while they're out. His parents introduced the babysitter to Darwin. Her name is Bella. Bella is the sister of the campus bully who was killed by Darwin 8 years ago. Darwin was shocked and was terrified of the looks of the scary girl. Bella grins at Darwin's parents as they were explaining the payment method. His parents were out. Bella and Darwin was left, Bella pulled Darwin’s t-shirt collar and shouted "You killed my brother, now I can have my revenge and I'll kill you painfully!” Darwin was scared and he ran away as quick as he could. He hid inside the cabinet. Unfortunately, Bella found him and she was bringing a very sharp dagger. Darwin pushed the door opened in a rattling manner while avoiding not to be hurt by the dagger. Bella laughed and laughed with her evil eyes like she is going nuts.  No matter how fast Darwin can run, Bella can still top his speed. Darwin hid in the kitchen and he was looking for a weapon to use to protect himself. Darwin didn't notice that Bella was behind him and attacked him from the back.  Darwin was unconscious and got dizzy afterwards, but he did not lose his breath. Bella was laughing- evil while staring at Darwin being hurt. Bella then opens the cabinets in the kitchen and found a bottle of muriatic acid. She grinned at Darwin and said "This would be a good cleaning chemical for you, Darwin! Hahahaha". She playfully said.  Darwin was really scared and wants to move away but he can't because his back was too painful to be moved. Bella opened the bottle's lid and splashed it to Darwin. Darwin shouted and cried. For the first time, he uttered words for Belle and said "Sorry for what I did to your brother, I was just protecting myself from him. If I did not kill him, he would have killed me first!" he explained with a breathless voice like an old man. A second after that, He died. Darwin's parents were shocked and they cried because their only son is gone.

 

 

They send Bella to jail because it was proven that Bella killed Darwin. Bella spend few months in jail and she became insane because of guiltiness that he killed a person who apologized right before it died in front of her. She was transferred to mental hospital and stayed that for therapy for years until she got old. Few months, she passed away the same day Darwin was killed. The doctor found out that Bella had a transparent thing inside is stomach. The doctor pulled it out and found out after dissecting the thing, a crashed bottle found in her throat and acidic saliva like muriatic acid was seen in the lab tests. Even the doctor can't explain how Belle survived for years with those and had this as the reason of her death.

 


 

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