Chapter 1: Rapunzel

by Jackunzel_Lover12
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I wrap my self in a soft red blanket, watching the snow fall slolwy outside my window. mother went to go pick some fresh fruit tonight to make pie, hoping to entertain me. She thinks that if she fattens me up ill be happy, but day by day life in this tower has been getting worse. I have painted almost every wall , and im running out of room. I used up all my clothe to make usless dresses. 17 years of this, and i still have at least 50 more to go,but only if im lucky. I tighten my grip on the blanket and sigh. A sharp, cool wind cuts through the window and blows the strands of hair in my face. I stare at the 70 foot pile of hair on the ground and wished i didnt have to lug it with me around the house. Pascal jumps into my lap and tilts his head at me, questioning me. " Sorry pascal, Im not in the mood."

He turns the color of the blanket and curls into a ball. I countinue to watch the snow when an icy breeve rolls through the room, making the make-shirt curtians flow with the wind. A small pattern of white makes its way down the window ledge, and they turn into spirals. My eyes widen, amazed. i shrug off the blanket and set pascal down on the plush chair. I slowly walked to the window and run my fingers alone the white, the coolnes melts beneath my finger tips. Ice? How is this ice? I hear a rustel in the kitchen so i turn around. I stalk to the counter and find a spoon on the floor. " So your the girl they were talking about?" I looked up and a boy sat on on the pillls across the ceiling. I grab a frying pan off the counter and hold it up. "Not what i expected."

"come near me all you'll get hurt," his eyes widen and he looks behind him. His white hair is is disheveld, and he is pale, almost snow white, and His eyes are the most gourgeous shade of light blue, that seem to glow in the dark. How did he get up there without me seeing him?He turns back to me and point to him self. "Yes im talking to you," I snarl, holding up the pan higher," how did you get in here?" He breathes heavlily, and watches me, Then he out right laughs. "Y-you can see me?" He stutters floating towards me, " You can see me!" He repeats louder this time. "Of course i can see you, now anwser my question."

"This must be why their so intrested in you?" He runs his hand through his hair, and floats, yes floats, down form the pillars and lands on the ground in front of me. I tighten my grip on the pan and take a step back. "How can you see me? your not one of the four," One of the four? what does he mean? "Look i dont know who you are or how you got here, but you need to leave. Now."

He watches me, those intense eyes pericing mine. He looks me over and i can feel the heat rising in my cheeks, and i hate myself for it. "I said you need to leave," he bends to look behind me and his eyes practically fall out of his head there so wide. "Wow. dude, your hair," I square my shoulders, dude? is that some kind of insult! "You obviously dont have very good listening skills, I-" 

He puts his hand up, "Ya, ya. I heard you, but i cant leave without you," Cant leave without me, I want to ask him a milion questions but the first thing i say is, "Im not aloud to leave."

he laughs quietly then tilts his head so his hair hangs loosly over his forhead, the moon hitting his eyes perfectly so the shine. I feel my self heat again, not knowing why im paying so close attention to him. "Of course you are. its this easy" he walks to the window and spreads out his hand, "I take you to the time helix and we go to norths shop, easy peasy."

North? shop? "Im not going any where with you," he stalks toward me and stops so that he is right infront of me, and i can feel his cool breath on my forhead. "It wasnt a choice blondie, I need you to come with me," I find it hard to breathe. why is he so close? and why cant i move? I find the strength in me somewhere to extend my arms and push him away. he stumbles back and has a look of amazment drawn over his face, and i cant help but feel pleased with my self. " how... why... y-you touched me."

I roll my eyes, " I told you to leave," He stood up and dusted himself off his eyes trained on me the whole time. "Why would'nt they tell me about you," he closed the distance between us, "there something different about you... I cant place it," maybe the part were i have magical hair. " I dont know wha tyou want from me," i whisper, scared to speak louder, " But you need to leave. mother will be back soon and wont be happy when she finds you here."

He rolls his eyes Then slowly raises his hand, and brings it to my face, cupping my cheek. his hand it cool yet warm, and i find my self almost leaning into it. I regain my focus an step back, scowling. "Im done asking."

He rolls his eyes once more, and in one swift motion he's in front of me, and his arm is snaking aorund my waist. I screech as he lifts me into the air and all of a sudden were out the window. In an instant the air is cold and crisp, and i start to shiver, but the boy doesnt seem to notice. I stare up at the sky and realize ive never been in the snow before. i stick out my hand and small flakes of ice pool in my hand then melt away, I laugh. i was so lost in the moment i forgot i was being kidnapped by a mysterious boy, i began to fails my arms and push him away. "Let.Me.Go!" i scream.

In an instant were on what i think is the ground and he releases me. I stumble back and fall into a pile of cold ,white, layer of softness. I freeze over an in instant, and my teeth begin to chatter. He pulls me into his arms once more and dusts the snow out of my hair, slowly. He keeps his eyes trained on mine, and i see something stir in his eyes and his pupils widen. He clears his throat and puts me at arms distance, motioning behind him. " we need to go."

A hole appeard in the middle of the hair, and had spirals of black, blue, and purple. I have never seen so many different shades of one color, and im meremerized, but i easily remeber why im here.I roll my eyes and stomp my foot into the icy ground. " I dont even know your name," I breathe helplessly. He seems almost shocked thats what i said, but it quickly turns into a lazy grin that makes my heart do flips. "Jack. Jack frost."

"Jack frost," The words taste sweet coming out my mouth and i savor each letter, But i quickly remeber why im here. " Well, Jack frost-"

"you can call me jack," I roll my eyes. "Well, Jack," I practically snarl his name, "Im not going anywhere-" and with that he grabed my wrist and pushed me into what seemed like a never ending pit of stars.

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