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she weeps because she's pathetic
she weeps because she was agitated of this world
she weeps because she's an idiot for letting go
she chokes on her own tears
she pulls out her hair and screams into the night
she lays there
black
burned
scorched
until her light finally dwindles out
and she vanishes into ashes
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PyaariSammu on says about chapter 11:
I think this one is my favorite of all the ones so far, it was beautiful.
solitude on says about chapter 11:
deep. so deep. ♥
creamson on says about chapter 8:
I love how some of your pieces are open to infinite interpretations; I love this one best. It seems to say something about our world today.
Pastelsky on says about chapter 7:
Ah! This was done well.
BeHappy on says about chapter 6:
Loving them!
They're each short but beautiful - words have a life of their own. :)
I'm looking forward to more and I especially loved chapter 4~
Pandas on says about chapter 6:
All of the chapters are short and concise. It's easy to read them, and the messages are always so loud and clear. I love it!
nightlife6081 on says about chapter 5:
These are really good! I'm looking forward to more~
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