into nothingness.

by influx
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and oh, you weep,

and oh, you lament

but your mind keeps telling you, 'it's no fault of yours, no, no no,'

but your heart says the opposite

'oh, but it's your fault, you cruel, cruel being,'

and you're torn

whether to believe your heart

or to believe

your own mind

 

and you decide to sob the night away

until you fade into dust

and tears

until you dissipate

into nothingness

 

 

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PyaariSammu  on says about chapter 11:
I think this one is my favorite of all the ones so far, it was beautiful.

solitude  on says about chapter 11:
deep. so deep. ♥

creamson  on says about chapter 8:
I love how some of your pieces are open to infinite interpretations; I love this one best. It seems to say something about our world today.

Pastelsky  on says about chapter 7:
Ah! This was done well.

BeHappy  on says about chapter 6:
Loving them!
They're each short but beautiful - words have a life of their own. :)
I'm looking forward to more and I especially loved chapter 4~

Pandas  on says about chapter 6:
All of the chapters are short and concise. It's easy to read them, and the messages are always so loud and clear. I love it!

nightlife6081  on says about chapter 5:
These are really good! I'm looking forward to more~

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