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by mymikp
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CHAPTER 1 : THE YOUNG LADY

ONE DAY .. THE YOUNG GIRL (( ALISECA )) WAS WALKING IN THE ROAD WHEN SHE SAW THE SEA. SHE WISHED TO BE THE PRINCESS OF THE SEA, BUT SHE KEPT TELLING HER SELF THAT IT’S IMPOSSIBLE. SHE DIDN’T KNOW THAT SOMEONE WAS STARING AT HER. SHE WAS REALY BEAUTIFUL. SHE WAS BEAUTIFUL AS MUCH AS A PRINCESS. EVERYONE LOVED HER AND ASKED HER TO BE THEIR FRIEND . OF COURS , SHE WON’T REFUSE. (( ALISECA )) STUDIED HARD AND WAS THE SMARTEST ONE IN HER CLASS . SHE WAS AMAZING IN EVERY THING . SHE WAS REALY THE BEST .

 

CHAPTER 2 : A LAIZARD ?!

( THE LAIZARDS ARE MEN WHO ARE A HALF OF FISH AND A HALF OF MAN ).

ONE DAY BY ONE (( ALISECA )) GREW UP AND BECAME PRETTEIR THAN EVER . ONE THING DIDN’T CHANGE . HER PERCEIOUS WISH TO BE THE PRINCESS OF THE SEA.

 ONE DAY SHE WAS SITTING IN A BIG ROCK NEAR THE SEA AND WHEN SHE ALMOST LEAVED , SHE HEARD A SIMPLE NOISE AND GOT SCARED . (( ALISECA )) WENT TO SEE WHO’S THERE , AND GUSSE WHAT ! . SHE SAW A VERY HANDSOME LAIZARD !. SHE WAS REALY SURPRISED !. SHE ASKED HIM IN A SHAKING VOICE : W..WHO ARE YOU ? . ARE YOU A REAL LAIZARD ??. THE LAIZARD SAID : Y..YES ! . ((ALISECA JANAJUK )) !. MY NAME IS (( SEBASTIAN ROGER )) . NICE TO MEET YOU, MY LADY . (( ALISECA )) WAS REALY SHOCKED !. HOW DOES THIS STRANGER KNOW HER NAME ? . IT’S NOT BY CHANCE OF COURS. SHE WAS SO CURIOUS TO KNOW , SO SHE ASKED HIM : HOW DID YOU KNOW  MY NAME MR.SEBASTIAN ? . HE LAUGHED THEN ANSERWED : SIBI PLEASE . HUH ! THERE’S NO NEED TO HIDE IT ANY MORE ! . I’VE FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU SINCE YOU WERE A BABY ! . WILL YOU MARRY ME ?. ALISECA WAS TOTALLY SHOCKED , BUT SHE SAID : I CAN’T . SORRY . MY PARENTS FOUND A MAN FOR ME ALREADY .

SIBI CRIED ON HER : THAT CAN’T BE ! . SAY THE TRUTH ! . DO YOU LOVE HIM ?! .

 

  • WELL , I DIDN’T SEE HIM TIL NOW.

HERE SIBI SAID HOPELY : THEN PLEASE COME WITH ME !. YOU’LL BE MY PRINCESS ! I AM THE PRINCE OF THE SEA !. YOU WON’T REGRET !.

ALISECA LOVED THE IDEA . DO YOU REMMEMBER HER DREAM ? .

SHE SAID : TAKE ME WITH YOU !.

HE WAS REALY REALY SURPRISED ! . HOW AND WHY ? . BUT HIS HAPPINESS WAS UNENDABLE ! . HE TOOK HER HAND AND SAID HAPPILY : I WILL TAKE CARE OF YOU FOR THE REST IF MY LIFE !.

ACTULLY ALISE DIDN’T LOVE HIM . SHE JUST WANTED TO BE THE SEA’S PRINCESS . WELL , SIBI COULDN’T SEE THAT BECAUSE OF HIS HAPPINESS . HE GAVE HER A FLOWER AND TOLD HER TO EAT IT . THE FLAVOR WAS HORRIBLE , BUT SHE ATE IT ALL AND WENT TO SEE THE KINGDOM OF THE SEA . IT WAS THE PRETTIEST PLACE SHE SAW !.

 

 

CHAPTER 3 : BE CAREFUL SON !

ONCE ALISE AND SIBI ARRIVED ALISE RAN TO THE PALACE. SHE LOVED EVERY THING . HIS FAMILY , THE GARDEN , EVERY THING IN THE PALACE AND THE PALACE IT SELF . SHE LOVED EVERY THING AND EVERY ONE .. YEAH .. EVERY ONE EXCEPT SIBI. THAT WAS CLEARLY CLEAR TO HIS MOTHER : ELIZABITH ROGER. SHE NOTICED THAT ALISE WAS SO COLD TO HER SON WHO WAS LAUGHING STUPIDLY . HE WAS A REAL FOOL AND HIS MOTHER DIDN’T LIKE THAT . SHE SENT A MESSAGE TO HER SON IN THAT DAY ..

SHE WROTE :

(( DEAR SON : I AM YOUR MOTHER . I DIDN’T WANT TO SAY THAT IN FRONT OF YOUR GIRL .. WHO DOESN’T LOVE YOU . YES ,SHE DOESN’T ! . I HAVN’T TOLD YOU YET , BUT SOME WOMEN ARE DANGEROUS ! THEY CAN MAKE THE UP DOWN AND THE DOWN UP – YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN . ALISECA WANTS YOUR MONEY . IT’S NOT LOVE TRULY . IT’S RUTH . THAT HOW SHE FEELS TO YOU . I’VE TOLD YOU EVERY THING.

                                                            YOUR BELOVED MOTHER ))

 

 

 

 

 

AND HIS REPLAY UNFORTUNATELY WAS :

(( MY BELOVED MOTHER : YOU DON’T WANT ME TO BE HAPPY ?.

IT’S TOO BAD . I LOVE ALISE AND SHE LOVES ME . HOW CRUEL ! .

I RESPECTED YOU , SO PLEASE DON’T SAY LIES !.

                                                                                     S.P.R ))

HIS MOTHER WEPT WHEN SHE SAW HIS REPLAY AND SAID : OH GOD ! . WHAT TO DO WITH MY VERY WILLFUL SON ?? .

 

 

 

CHAPTER 4 : THE DISLOYALTY .

WHEN SIBI RETURNED ALISE SHE WAS SAD AND WEPT : OH HONEY ! COME BACK TO TAKE ME ! . HE SAID : DON’T WORRY I WILL COME BACK TO YOU TOMORROW .. DEAL ? . – DEAL ! .

WHEN SIBI DISAPPEARED FROM HER SIGHT SHE LOOKED AROUND AND SAW A HANDSOME MAN WHO WAS WALKING . THIS TIME IT WAS LOVE . SHE RAN TO HIM ..AND WHEN HE SAW HER HE ASKED : OH ! . AREN’T YOU ALISECA JANAJUK ? . YOU’RE MY FIANCE . YOUR PARENTS ARE WORREID ABOUT YOU .. I AM KAIN . LET’S GO ! . THEN SHE SAID HAPPILY : OKAY ! .

IN THAT MOMENT THE HEART OF SIBI BROKE .. HE HEARED AND SAW . YOU DON’T KNOW HOW PAINFUL  IT WAS TO HIM . HE WENT BACK TO HIS MOTHER AND WEPT . HE ASKED HER TO FORGIVE HIM . LET’S MOVE NOW TO KAIN . KAIN WAS A FINE LOOKING MAN ,BUT COLD HEARTED . HE WANTED TO GET MARREID TO BUILD THE BEST ARMY TO DEFEAT THE COUNTRY ! . HE WANTED HER TO BEAR 20 TOGETHER ! . HOW STUPID HE WAS ! . LET’S TALK ABOUT SIBI NOW : HIS MOTHER TOOK HIM TO MEET HER NEIGHBOOR’S DAUGHTER MIKODA . AND HE LOVED HER NICE SMILE AND HER BEAUTIFUL FACE . SHE WASN’T AS BEAUTIFUL AS ALISE BUT SHE WAS HONEST AND KIND . SIBI WAS HEARTSICK AND SHE HEALED HIM .HE WAS DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH HER AND DECIDED TO  MARRY HER ON THE NEXT DAY .  THEY PREPEARD EVERY THING . ALISECA WONDERED WHY DIDN’T SIBI COME TO HER ? . OH ! . HE IS A PRINCE , SO HE MUST BE BUSY . SHE THOUGHT LIKE THAT AND ATE THE FLOWER HE GAVE TO HER AND WENT DOWNER AND DOWNER . SHE SAW THE PREPERATIONS  AND THOUGHT THAT ALL OF  THAT WAS FOR HER . SHE FOOLED HIM ! . THAT SUDDENLY RANG IN HER MIND . BUT IN THAT MOMENT SIBI AND MIKODA WERE ALREADY MARREID .( IN THE SEA THE MARRIGE HAS TO BE BEFOR THE MARRIGE PARTY ). ALISE CAME NEARER TO THE PALACE , BUT THE WATCHERS STOPPED HER . SHE SHOUTED ON THEM : WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE ? . I WILL FIRE YOU ! . I AM THE NEW PRINCESS OF THE SEA ! . THEN THE WATCHERS STARTED TO LAUGH AND SAID : HAHAHA ! . DO YOU THINK THAT OUR PRINCE WOULD DO SUCH A CRIME ? . MRS. MIKODA IS ALREADY HIS WIFE , BESIDES YOU HAVE LEGS ! . DISAPPEAR FROM MY SIGHT ! .

THEN SIBI CAME WITH MIKODA AND TOLD THE WATCHERS TO LEAVE HER . AFTER THAT HE SAID : WHAT DO YOU WANT ? .

HOW SHAME ! . TWO MEN .. HUH ? . IN YOUR DREAMS YOU- AND SHE HUGED HIM .. – SORRY ! . I WILL LEAVE KAIN , SO BREAK UP WITH THIS BITCH ! . HE PUSHED HER AND SHOUTED: SHUT THE MOUTH OF YOU ! . MY WIFE ISN’T RUTHFUL AS YOU ! . GO ! . GO AWAY AND MAKE SURE THAT YOU WILL NEVER COME AGAIN ! .

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 5 : THE PAINFUL END

ALISE COULDN’T BELIVE WHAT HAPPENED . SHE RETURNED SLOWLY AND REMEMBERD EVERY MINUTE WITH SIBI . SHE STARTED TO CRY . SHE REMEMBERD HIS LOVELY FACE AND VOICE. SHE LOVED HIM WITHOUT KNOWING . (( WHY ? )) SHE KEPT SAYING THAT TO HERSELF . FINELLY SHE GOT OUT FROM THE WATER . SHE KNEW HOW MUCH SHE WAS STUPID . SHE RAN TO THE FOREST AND STARTED TO BE CRAZY. WHEN SHE CAME BACK TO THE BEACH SHE SAW KAIN . HE SAID SOFTELY : COME ON MY LADY. WASH YOUR BODY AND WEAR YOUR WHITE DRESS . SHE WAS STILL HAPPY , BUT AFTER MARRIENG, KAIN WENT TO THE TOWN . WHEN THE DAWN STARTED ALISE WAS LOOKING TO THE SEA . SHE SAW A DRUNK MAN COMING . AH ! . THAT CAN’T BE ! . KAIN ? . KAIN SHOUTED :  HERE HERE HAHA ! . COME TO ME DARLING HERE ! .

THE STUPID GIRL RAN TO HIM . HE SAID : I .. I WANNA KILL YOU ! . THERE’S NO NEED TO YOU ANY MORE ! . I AM NOT ABLE TO GET ANY CHILDREN !.. DIE ! . HE HIT HER WITH THE GLASS . SHE FELL DEAD AFTER MURMURING : SORRY .. 

 

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lightninthunderstein  on says about chapter 1:
I enjoyed reading you're story^^ It was very creative, but the caps sorta threw me off. Good work~

arosebushqueen  on says about chapter 1:
So maybe you shouldn't write in caps lock, but I liked the idea! It was just it sounded like someone was screaming at me...

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