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"I love you."
"Thankyou for teaching me how to love."
No foreword posted.
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I like it. Agree with the first comment, you captured the emotions very well. Thank you for sharing this with us :)
This was nice.. abstract in a way and it totally described my thoughts right now o.o
Those were some interestting thoughts (:
That was nice.
I thought this was a good example of stream of consciousness, and felt that you captured the emotions in losing a loved one very well (: I particularly liked the anonymity of the story, as well as how vague it was. I felt that added quite a bit to it!
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