Out Of the Ordinary

by snowflakes
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warning: excessive weirdness and crack ahead. Scroll down at your own risk.

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Ashley and Zoe are standing in front of an old wooden house. The paint have been faded, windows broken, vines of plants has already crept up half of the house.

Ashley looked at the ad, the house looks completely warm and cozy as a summer house, the same way they should see the structure in front of them right now. She fixed her gaze back from the house. Their money is gone just for a piece of junk.

Zoe whose looking at the house with an are-you-kidding-me face starts to speak, "So this is it?" Zoe looked at her sister, "The grand cottage of the Olme's Estate"

"It should be. This house has the same address with what Mr. Falkien had given us" Ashley  trying to make her voice sounded sure. "C'mon we should start unpacking now" Ashley slipped in the paper in her pocket, grabbed her golden brown suitcase and started heading to their new home with heavy footsteps as Zoe followed her behind with her luggage tucked in her hands as well.

With her free hand, Ashley grabbed the door knob and twisted it. As it opened,  an odd odor that seemed colonized the whole place greeted them. The furnishings was antique as if they have time travelled to the era when war was still raging on. Almost of the things were made from wood, wooden walls, wooden floor, wooden tables, wooden shelves.

With a thud, they dropped their bags onto the floor, not caring if their things get dirty from the dusty floor.

"I don't think we may survive a storm with this house" Zoe stated as she traveled her eyes around. 

Ashley shuffled up the stairs. She was too tired to join her sister complaining on their new house. Upon getting on the second floor,  there were three wooden doors. Ashley decided to open the door on the right, twisting the knob, Ashley did not anticipate to witness what had been revealed before her. The door was not leading to a room rather a portal was hidden beyond the door.

"Zoe!" Ashley yelled. Zoe jumped up at the sudden voice, she regained her senses and dashed towards the stairs. "What happened?!" Zoe asked. Ashley tilted her head and raised her hand pointing to the door, "L-look" Ashley said.  Her sister looked at her with a confused look before moving her head towards the door.

"What the heck" Zoe blurted out and left her mouth agaped, eyes bulging out, "Why is there a forest full of  bunnies jumping all over the room?!"

"Well, I think it is a portal" 

Zoe raised her brow. "You've got to be kidding me" Zoe slowly backed away."Maybe we are just too tired from the trip. Let's rest on the other room" 

Zoe turned around and headed for the other door. She twisted the knob, revealing a room. A weird room. The interior of the room was  modern and there were big glass walls.  Out of nowhere, several men came into view. They were dancing. Zoe shifted her gaze at Ashley as her lips curved into a sly grin.  "Are these doors really portals?" Zoe asked. 

Something told Ashley that she should walked closer to her and check out what Zoe had found out to be grinning as some thief that robbed a sack of billion dollars. Zoe moved away from the door to let Ashley take a glance of what she saw. Several cute guys are dancing on the room

Then, it hit her "Zoe don't tell me you're going in there?" Ashley abruptly turned her head to Zoe.

"Well, I can't make those cuties wait, right?"

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Iefa_San  on says about chapter 1:
Haha... Is this drabbles somehow what your heart wants? LOL... Going into a house then found a door that leads to a lot of cutie guys? XD Well, if you found the house, don't forget to call me! XD

Iefa_San  on says about chapter 2:
Wow.. this is interesting.. Nicely done!

coffeeplease  on says:
oh my gosh write more please <33

EmptyPromises  on says about chapter 6:
...This is so heartbreaking. The little boy doesn't know where his "flaw" lies (even if he has tried his best and it can't be really called a flaw) and having been told that's it not enough. And he just sees the disappointment in his mother; he wants to do better, but he's done well already. It's sad, the way you write it, he thinks so innocently, he doesn't know that he's good. It's so innocent that it hurts...
I'm sorry I wrote all that (I never know my limit) but I just wanted to say that it's very well written.

EmptyPromises  on says about chapter 5:
I like these a lot! You write well. It's nice that you write random drabbles.. they turn out really nice. And I just need to say that I love this line "she became the darkness she was afraid of". It gives that sort of impact, you know?
(I'm not making sense)
But anyways, thanks for the story!

splash  on says:
I like the way you write; I'll stick around for your updates :)

jj_maple  on says:
Random stories sometimes turn interesting....or weird :)
please update and do you do requests?

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