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Puella is a latin word for Female
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In the middle of the unlit room an enormous glass ball was gleaming brightly. It was placed under a golden stand with artistic floral carvings ebbed on it. Inside the ball is an important living form for the Quatrians. She is the balance of good and evil forces, she is the one to stop the cruelty and unjust treatment of Canis, she is the last descendant.
The day has come. The day she is going to be filled with life.
Energy was flowing through her veins. Her slim fingers agitated, her arms and limbs slowly moved, streching every joint of her bones. Her pale lips turned into crimson red, her brunette hair have been darker than before. In a moment, her dark blue eyes were wide open and glowing with faint tint of pearlescent.
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Author's note: Okay, I've wanted to write something like this, something more fantasy? But, I suck at it.
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Iefa_San on says about chapter 1:
Haha... Is this drabbles somehow what your heart wants? LOL... Going into a house then found a door that leads to a lot of cutie guys? XD Well, if you found the house, don't forget to call me! XD
Iefa_San on says about chapter 2:
Wow.. this is interesting.. Nicely done!
coffeeplease on says:
oh my gosh write more please <33
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 6:
...This is so heartbreaking. The little boy doesn't know where his "flaw" lies (even if he has tried his best and it can't be really called a flaw) and having been told that's it not enough. And he just sees the disappointment in his mother; he wants to do better, but he's done well already. It's sad, the way you write it, he thinks so innocently, he doesn't know that he's good. It's so innocent that it hurts...
I'm sorry I wrote all that (I never know my limit) but I just wanted to say that it's very well written.
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 5:
I like these a lot! You write well. It's nice that you write random drabbles.. they turn out really nice. And I just need to say that I love this line "she became the darkness she was afraid of". It gives that sort of impact, you know?
(I'm not making sense)
But anyways, thanks for the story!
splash on says:
I like the way you write; I'll stick around for your updates :)
jj_maple on says:
Random stories sometimes turn interesting....or weird :)
please update and do you do requests?
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