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Too good to last.
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Spring has always reminded me of birth, and new beginnings. It was almost as if the earth had underwent a renaissance, and the blossoms burst into full bloom with vivid brilliance.
The blades of grass underneath my skin were coarse and itchy, and clouds obscured the sun overhead, giving shelter from the sweltering heat. I closed my eyes as I lay on my mother’s lap, the breeze caressed my sweaty skin. Mom was knitting peacefully, and as she weaved the fabrics, I heard her start to sing softly. It was an old lullaby that she used to sing when I was a child, and the calming melody mingled with the familiar smell of roasting cinnamon that drifted from the open window - signaling Aunt Carrie’s presence in the kitchen as she baked.
In that brief moment, everything was perfect.
I should have known it was too good to last.
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GeminiDragon on says about chapter 6:
Very nice. Rogue is my Favorite X-Men character so see this point of view it makes it very interesting. I like this a lot, love the poster. Very Cool.
loveynovy on says:
Love it! :)
angelicsmile on says:
Nice story ^^
misslavender01 on says about chapter 6:
sweeeet, love it.
orchidsplash on says:
congrats on getting featured.... like 2 years later. but still good enough. =]
jeiraz on says:
Was wondering who you are then I saw your username.
Looking forward for this. :)
giraffehugger on says about chapter 6:
nice.. I am a fan of rogue. It's like x-men begins rogue version. well done tia. ^_^
orchidsplash on says about chapter 6:
hmm not bad.
i like it.
it is a nice take on Rogue.
she was one of my favorite characters in the animated series.
but didn't like her that much in the live versions though.
thanks for sharing!
stanleyunique on says:
Interesting. It shall be a sweet read. I love your wording and the way you've captured me from the FIRST sentence. And I love your artwork! I guess I know who to go to if I need a poster ;) haha. I can't wait. Take your time. Good luck.
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