Calling -sarang

by BeHappy
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one hundred chances at romance

Reviewer: BeHappy

 

Title (8/10pts): Hm...I like the "one hundred chances", but the "at romance" part seems really cliche. I also like the Chinese characters!

Graphics/Trailer (5pts): N/A

Description & Foreword (15/15pts): I really like the Description with all the themes! The foreword though, could have been slightly bigger (the font). For the description, I understand because there are one hundred things you need to have down, but I expected the foreword's font to be much bigger than it is. 

Characters (10pts): They're OCs.

Plot (Yes): Really creative! I like it! It has a fresh, young, type of feeling to it.

Mechanics [Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Syntax, etc] (20/20pts): There weren't any errors I caught. Even if there were, they couldn't have been so major as to kick some points off because I didn't notice any. 

Flow (10/10pts): Good transitions!

Visual things (8/10pts): As mentioned before, the font was small in the foreword. Also, I would have like to see some paragraph structure instead of a block of words for each paragraph! In addition, instead of the pinyin for each chapter number, I would have liked to see the actual Chinese character since there are Chinese characters in the title. This would help with consistency. Lastly, I'm Chinese so that's a bit of a bother. xD

Ending (15pts): Has not ended yet~

Bonus (5/5pts possible): Very creative!

Extra Comments/Notes/Author's Comment:

Haha, this is probably the quickest I've done a review: in one sitting. You had a nice, creative story. 

Total: 66/70 (94%)

 

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ByungKitty  on says:
happy late birthday~ :3

snowflakes  on says:
I've request a review for my story, thank you! :)

jj_maple  on says about chapter 7:
Thanks for your review ^^
I didn't mind waiting at all.

yingjumeihua  on says:
I requested for one of my stories.

lostreader  on says about chapter 6:
omg, I don't think I ever got such high score *^*
Thank you for the review and I don't mind waiting! :D
I'm going to credit now :3

FTisland_BigBang  on says about chapter 5:
tnx! I'll try to improve it :) did I put report? @_@ I just rwalize that... Thanks again :)

lostreader  on says:
I requested :3

sleepwalker  on says about chapter 4:
No way! I've never received a score that high before LOL (probably because I rarely request reviews). Thank you for taking the time to review my story. May I ask you something? Did you think my chapters were too short?
Ah, I'm glad I could show you a different perspective on capitalization of story titles. And lol Snoopy is great xD I just found it random haha
Again, thank you for the review! I'll make sure to request in the future.

mafalda  on says:
Requested~! :D

Cremeplan42  on says about chapter 1:
Want to add another reviewer to the list? LOL. I want to apply.

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