Calling jj_maple

by BeHappy
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How to make a sandwhich

Reviewer: BeHappy

 

Title (10/10pts): ROFL this had me rolling on the floor laughing! Clearly a crackfic.

Graphics/Trailer (5pts): N/A

Description & Foreword (15/15pts): Self explanatory, lol. Good choice thanking all your subbies, upvoters, and people that commented!

Characters (10pts): N/A

Plot: Is it interesting? (Yes/No): *NO PLOT*

Mechanics [Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Syntax, etc] (20/20pts): No mistakes! :D

Flow (10/10pts): Your sandwhich steps made sense. xD

Visual things (10/10pts): Print size was perfect!

Ending (15/15pts): MUHAHAHA LEMME EAT MA HARD EARNED SANDWHICH

Bonus (5/5pts possible): Awes0me crack fic!

Extra Comments/Notes/Author's Comment:

I'm sorry this took such a long time! I was in a very intense math course.

Total: 85/85 

 

 

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ByungKitty  on says:
happy late birthday~ :3

snowflakes  on says:
I've request a review for my story, thank you! :)

jj_maple  on says about chapter 7:
Thanks for your review ^^
I didn't mind waiting at all.

yingjumeihua  on says:
I requested for one of my stories.

lostreader  on says about chapter 6:
omg, I don't think I ever got such high score *^*
Thank you for the review and I don't mind waiting! :D
I'm going to credit now :3

FTisland_BigBang  on says about chapter 5:
tnx! I'll try to improve it :) did I put report? @_@ I just rwalize that... Thanks again :)

lostreader  on says:
I requested :3

sleepwalker  on says about chapter 4:
No way! I've never received a score that high before LOL (probably because I rarely request reviews). Thank you for taking the time to review my story. May I ask you something? Did you think my chapters were too short?
Ah, I'm glad I could show you a different perspective on capitalization of story titles. And lol Snoopy is great xD I just found it random haha
Again, thank you for the review! I'll make sure to request in the future.

mafalda  on says:
Requested~! :D

Cremeplan42  on says about chapter 1:
Want to add another reviewer to the list? LOL. I want to apply.

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