shi er ; the nature of the universe

by -sarang
Tags   romance   angst   oneshot   original   fluff   challenge   prompts   | Report Content


They all told me I would die. Those little whispers in my ear at dusk, and then again at dawn. I paid little attention to them; such was my fear that they were true. They said the mountains would open up and swallow me whole, but I said that the universe couldn't do that. It would be against it's nature. And the little whispers asked, well what is its nature then? I sat there dumbfounded, entirely flabberghasted at what they said. I crushed my eyebrows together and crinkled my eyes, desperately trying to search for an answer to their question. I wanted to let them know I was too smart to die; that it would be a waste if I did. Finally, I dug up my answer one foggy day in April. I said, the nature of the universe is to stay the same it always has been; in homeostasis. The little whispers grew quiet, and didn't disturb me any longer.


//+ i'm liking these short stories. any feedback?


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littlemeanie  on says about chapter 1:
The idea of making stories based on prompts is very fresh and unique. I really enjoy reading it!

harmonleexkris  on says about chapter 18:
Wow, these stories are really nice. Creating a story plot out of prompts is really awesome, I really like to do those as well. Continue writing! I will carry on reading as well. (:

WinnieStar  on says about chapter 15:
i thought the boy was deaf or something?

rapunzel  on says about chapter 16:
wow make a story out of this

lovelyfawn  on says:
you have good english

CheqBeah96  on says:
I can't stop reading this!! update again author-nim!!!

byzelo  on says about chapter 17:
I like this one! Especially when I can, kind of, relate it. Not that I'm a smart student but I've been stressed out lately, I understand what the characters feel.

SuchChocolate  on says about chapter 17:
This is really sweet >.<

coffeeplease  on says:
update! :D

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