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by -sarang
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Un-SaveI could see it. The look of lust, the look of passion, the look of your outright expression of your love. It was hidden inside those deep brown pupils; like a secret meaning inside of a book. Now I see the way you look at me; full of wonder and full of love. I wish I could've seen it before, maybe I would've treasured you more than I did. But the time's up for regrets; now your eyes are glassy, void of expression. Did I do that to you? Did I take away that lovely look deep in your eyes?
//+and another~ so angsty jeesh
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littlemeanie on says about chapter 1:
The idea of making stories based on prompts is very fresh and unique. I really enjoy reading it!
harmonleexkris on says about chapter 18:
Wow, these stories are really nice. Creating a story plot out of prompts is really awesome, I really like to do those as well. Continue writing! I will carry on reading as well. (:
WinnieStar on says about chapter 15:
i thought the boy was deaf or something?
rapunzel on says about chapter 16:
wow make a story out of this
lovelyfawn on says:
you have good english
CheqBeah96 on says:
I can't stop reading this!! update again author-nim!!!
byzelo on says about chapter 17:
I like this one! Especially when I can, kind of, relate it. Not that I'm a smart student but I've been stressed out lately, I understand what the characters feel.
SuchChocolate on says about chapter 17:
This is really sweet >.<
coffeeplease on says:
update! :D
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