Chapter 8: At Beach Rose Town

by WinnieStar
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Dear Readers,

You might see that the places are different because I need places to fit the story so the storyline would be different from the actual anime. So please be mindful for this mistake. Also I don’t know what the towns really look like, so please be considerate of this.

           Yours sincerely WinnieStar

 

Chapter 8: At Beach Rose Town

 

Xiaoling and her ‘guides’ step through a large gate, welcoming them with a warm breeze. “Freedom”, was the word that reached their mind. The warm breeze made them feel at home, the town was filled with people with happy big smiles. As they walked in they saw how big the town was filled with people walking around. The town was filled with a happy and warm feeling.  The sun was bright and smiling broadly. The clouds were dancing and flying across the sun. It was like the sky was in joy and playing around. A welcoming sky. Xiaoling smiled as she saw the town in her view. Xiaoling had never seen such a beautiful town with many friendly looking people although they may actually are nice.

As they took more steps they saw how wonderful the town was. The buildings were old and new. They could see the shops and the sea side. Pokémon trainers and their Pokémon walked around and a field was filled with Pokémon trainers and their Pokémon and friends. Some were playing and others were training. But still the sight was magnificent. Xiaoling had never seen such things like this. A whole community together, like a big family.

Shops filled with people talking and laughing. Kids running and others walking together and having fun. The town was like an impossibly happy town from a dream.

It was a perfect town that no one could ever imagine.

“Wow. It’s definitely breath taking.” Xiaoling said. 

Ash, Brock, Dawn and Pikachu nodded. “Pika PI!”

“Yes Pikachu! We could stay here for days!” Ash replied.

“Wow. LET’S GO SHOPPING!” Dawn said.

Wait, what did they just say? Stay forever? Shopping? No, no NO! Xiaoling shook her head in disagreement. “We won’t do any of those, right?”

“Yeah, sure. You do your own stuff and we do ours. Bye.” Dawn said and started walking towards a shop.

Xiaoling ran in front of her and stood in front of them, stopping them from walking any further. “Fine, but we still have to be together and get some food. Find a place to stay until we go.” Xiaoling said in-a-matter-of-factly voice. Xiaoling waited for their answers.

“Yeah sure. But that will be hard. First of all we don’t know where.” Ash said.

“And second of all we don’t-” Brock said.

“You guys don’t have MONEY!!!!” Xiaoling shouted in shock. *face palms* “You’ve got to be kidding me.”

They shook their head in reply. *sigh* Xiaoling shook her head in disappointment. “Fine come on, come over here, there’s a restaurant and a hotel up ahead.” Xiaoling responded and lead the way.

“I thought you said you didn’t go out of your home town.”

“True but also not true. I’ve been here a few times as a child but haven’t been here since so yeah. Enjoy hopefully they’ll remember me, ‘kay?”

“Sure….. Wait, ‘they’?” Ash asked.

“Yup they.”

Xiaoling saw a huge building and went in with her ‘guides’ following behind. “Welcome.” Two girls said formally but still greeting with (to Xiaoling’s view fake) smiles. So fake. Forcing it is the word….. Xiaoling thought. Then she continued to walk until she fell over and her face hit the ground. She screamed as she fell so basically everyone saw her fall. “OWW! OW! OW!  OWWWWWW! OW!” Xiaoling shouted. Tears were starting to fall out, but of course she wouldn’t cry because she didn’t want anyone to see her cry. Stay strong. Ow ow!  Xiaoling was still on the floor, lifeless. The whole building was quiet waiting for Xiaoling to spring to life. To come back to earth. If she was even gone……

 

To Be Continue………………………..

 

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Okay, hey there. Another one up, since this is just the edited ver. so the "to be continued............" part was there cause i usually added every once a week or whenever i can. so i added the "to be continued........" cause well it made sense. 

 

please comment! ^-^ >3< 

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coffeeplease  on says:
this is good lol

Fantasy  on says about chapter 1:
Isn't this confusing to you?
If a person didn't know what Pokemon is I mean
But then again
Who doesn't know Pokemon?

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